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Need Critique for a new tune

NY Oud - 2-13-2012 at 03:19 PM

I just started writing my own piece for fun. Let me know what you guys think. I need feedback. This is just the basic skeleton. I want to see if I am headed in the right direction with this piece or should I scrap it altogether.

N.Anthony



http://www.mediafire.com/?kjlgs5frg81bkab

ameer - 2-13-2012 at 04:16 PM

I like it. It sounds like a Farid El Atrash style dance piece, though why I say that I'm not entirely sure; just the feel I guess. It sounds like something one could arrange for orchestra and put in a film score. Keep polishing it and be sure to show us the next iteration.

MatthewW - 2-15-2012 at 08:31 AM

you play the chords very well. I agree with ameer, it has a lot going for it, keep polishing it off. if you find any belly dancers to back you up, give me a call. :D

NY Oud - 2-15-2012 at 09:39 AM

Thank you...I think there are a few belly dancing troops in the area up here. I always wanted to play the accompaniment for them. Thank you again for the encouragement. I am still working on it.

Jono Oud N.Z - 2-19-2012 at 09:13 PM

I can definitely see a good tune here.
Nice playing too.
:cool:



Giorgioud - 2-26-2012 at 02:59 PM

Nice one, man......I'm impressed...........