NY Oud
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Need Critique for a new tune
I just started writing my own piece for fun. Let me know what you guys think. I need feedback. This is just the basic skeleton. I want to see if I am
headed in the right direction with this piece or should I scrap it altogether.
N.Anthony
http://www.mediafire.com/?kjlgs5frg81bkab
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ameer
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I like it. It sounds like a Farid El Atrash style dance piece, though why I say that I'm not entirely sure; just the feel I guess. It sounds like
something one could arrange for orchestra and put in a film score. Keep polishing it and be sure to show us the next iteration.
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MatthewW
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you play the chords very well. I agree with ameer, it has a lot going for it, keep polishing it off. if you find any belly dancers to back you up,
give me a call. 
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NY Oud
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Thank you...I think there are a few belly dancing troops in the area up here. I always wanted to play the accompaniment for them. Thank you again for
the encouragement. I am still working on it.
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Jono Oud N.Z
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I can definitely see a good tune here.
Nice playing too.
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Giorgioud
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Nice one, man......I'm impressed...........
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